Comments for Blogging Through Year 12

Comment on Five steps to Language Analysis Success! by Bigman

Bigman — Sun, 26 Sep 2010 12:42:29 +0000

agree 100% except for advice on addressing tone, it shouldn’t be mentioned in the introduction, but rather in a body paragraph on its own. In year 12 language analysis tasks, you can almost guarantee their will be multiple tones and tone shifts, describing how the tone works to persuade and ingratiate the audience and how tone shits work to evoke different reactions in reader not only shows good understanding language analysis, but also allows you to eat up more space in your essay, especially for those struggling to make the word limit. The best essays always explore the tone in depth.

Comment on For the fun of it by Cheryl

Cheryl — Wed, 22 Sep 2010 07:46:30 +0000

Amen to that last sentence. Zoe, what are you going to pursue post-VCE? You haven’t written about your aspirations yet. I may or may not have read every word you have posted…

Comment on Planomania! by Zoe

Zoe — Mon, 24 May 2010 10:02:47 +0000

I can’t say I agree about shopping Jesse (I won’t attempt to sway you…this time), but I’m glad you found some satisfaction in list-making. I’m so jealous of your exam-less June! You’ll have to have some fun on behalf of those of us who weren’t so fortunate

Comment on About our bloggers by Jessica

Jessica — Mon, 17 May 2010 04:10:39 +0000

Perhaps there can be no perfection. Only levels of imperfection. Omly…. Differences. Each time we move closer and closer-but can never be satisfied. A piece is never complete, only at some satge abandoned. great quote

Comment on I may actually use this when I’m through with it by Jason Whitmen

Jason Whitmen — Sun, 16 May 2010 23:00:17 +0000

Just wanted to say HI. I found your blog a few days ago on Technorati and have been reading it over the past few days.